Sneak Peek at Cyrene Storyline.

Discussion in 'Planet Cyrene' started by Ed 3 - Cyrene, Oct 4, 2010.

  1. Chapter one, "The Sons of Remus".

    Planet Staverron. Outer rim, sector 8 of the Imperium. 17,005 GE (Galactic Empire)


    The thunder of the particle cannons against the defense shields was a deafening and rude awakening. Sargent Jonah Armstrong waited outside impatiently for his Captains orders. It seemed that the Captain was shell shocked from the get go and refused to give the order to attack. Five long and stressful minutes had passed and still no order for the counter attack was given. Their position was weakening with every salvo, suddenly one of the cannons broke through the power shields and struck the command bunker. The Captain lay outside incoherently, saved only by his personal suit's added defense shield. At the sight of seeing the Captain go down, Sargent Jonah started giving orders to mount up and prepare for a counter attack. As the troops climbed into their power armor and vehicles for the counter strike, the assault that had started without warning, had quickly stopped. The sudden silence was maddening, had they all gone deaf or was it even worse? One of the corporals asked the Sargent "Sir how could they know our location, and how did they sneak onto the planet without our knowledge?" The Sargent was just as confused, only the Turrelions could have performed such a surprise attack, but they were the oldest of the Imperium's allies. The Sargent yelled at the corporal to go into the command bunker to see if the communication center was still operational. Soon after he had gone inside, the corporal came out with a pale face. The squad looked at one another confused as the corporal announced, "It's over." The Sargent calmed the men who broke out into a loud shouts of confusion and shock. He then asked" What do you mean it's over, did those guns get taken out? Speak up son." The Corporal just looked directly into the Sargent hardened face and exclaimed, "Supreme Commander Hillsbrad has surrendered the Empire over to the Coalition. We are to follow suit and prepare for orders from our new Coalition commanders." The squad began to cry out angrily yet again, none could comprehend such an order. The Captain, who moments before lay on the floor, stood up and gained his composure. "Settle down men, you heard the order from HQ." The Sargent quickly snapped back to attention. He was ever defiant at the news of surrender, but he was a true soldier and would follow an order to the death for the Imperium. The Sargent ordered," You heard the Captain, troops, lets get this base back into shape and prepare for our instructions."

    Moments later, inside a make shift command tent, the Captain was on his tactical control screen as he notices the Sargent waiting patiently outside the tent. The Captain asks" What can I do for you Jonah?" "Sir, permission to speak freely, sir." The Captain nods his permission and the Sargent entered the tent. "I just don't understand it, sir. Why would we surrender? We are the most powerful of all the nine thousand nations and we still retain all 3 of our highly fortified home world sectors." The Captain responds, "It's simple math, Jonah, the Coalition has managed to ally themselves with too many of the Tier Elite nations. It would be only a matter of time before we would have to surrender. We could hold off for years to come, but eventual..." The Sargent emotionally interrupts, "S.C. Hillsbrad is a coward, sir." The Captain continues,", Jonah, Hillsbrad is a tactician. He knows the Empire cannot win versus the thousands of nations preparing to take control of our sectors." The Sargent cannot believe what he is hearing from an Imperium officer, "Sir the Imperium is the only true ruler of Humanity, how can we bow down to a corporation with delusions of grandeur? Three hundred years ago they where selling appliances and now they are set to become our masters?" The Captain looks unfazed by the remark and responds, "Politicians care not of bloodlines or seventeen thousand years of tradition, Jonah. That "corporation" has what every man in the farthest reaches of space wants. The Coalition has made the promise of eternal life to anyone who would join. I am afraid it's proven too strong a temptation even for our noblest of ally nations." The Sargent grows even more bold, "So what now then, sir? Do we help them in their quest to rule the nations of Mankind, all for the promise of living like a dog for eternity?"

    "There is yet hope, Jonah," responds the Captain. A confused look is now on the Sargent's face, "How can that be sir? Hillsbrad has served us up on a silver platter to the Coalition." The Captain calmly responds while walking towards a table. "Years ago, Jonah, I was sent to a world far into the depths of the lowliest sectors. A small planet that was deemed too insignificant to set up proper mining operations on. It was established as a resort world for the Imperium elite due to it's natural beauty and original home world feel. Kept a secret from all but those lucky enough to be invited, the planet has stayed low in profile even till today. The planet, named Cyrene, is a beautiful but dangerous world, Jonah. Much had to be done so the elite could enjoy their new found playground. While I was down there, leading countless clean-up missions and patrols, I discovered something of great use. As a matter of fact, I had just recently spoken personally with Hillsbrad a week ago while he was down in sector 8 for reviews. Needless to say I was able to convince him of some important matters concerning the Imperium and planet Cyrene. Unfortunately, the surprise attack on our position today has forced us to escalate our plans.

    The Sargent was deeply confused and did not understand, "Sir, I just don't get any of what you are saying." The Captain walks to a small table, picks up a flask containing a deep purple fluid. He pours into a small cup and offers it to Sargent Jonah. "Have a sip of this sweet nectar, Jonah. It is the juice from the finest fruit on planet Cyrene." Jonah takes the cup and prepares to drink the sweet fragrant juice. After enjoying the aroma he drinks it slowly and then finds he has drank the entire cups worth of juice. The Captain looks at Jonah and asks, "Well, how was it Jonah?" The Sargent produced a smile and responded, "Amazing sir, I feel... happy, my mind is at peace, almost as if I was..." The Captain responds for him, "Enlightened." The Sargent not caring about what had just transpired just stood there and enjoyed the feeling. The Captain turns his back and with a large grin exclaims. "Excellent, Sargent Jonah, I would now like to welcome you to the a new era, a new Empire for mankind. Welcome to, The Sons of Remus."
  2. NotAdmin

    NotAdmin Administrator

    Oh man. The first thought i had?

    "please daddy, some more?"
  3. kalanen

    kalanen roadkill

    There's a mild pleasant aroma of Iain M. Banks & Culture.

    Rock'n'roll! :D
  4. Tass

    Tass Administrator

    Awesome. (Too awesome to be wikified even ;) )

    Shabby Turrelions!

    Tyvm Ed.
  5. Lykke TheNun

    Lykke TheNun Lootius bless you all!


    THAT, my dear fellow Entropians, is what I'm talking about! Story with substance!

    I want more :(
  6. In summary, drinking the purple kool-aid is bad!!! :)
  7. hmmmm
    at me don t sound very original actually..........................

    A coalition take the power over the empire thx to some internal traitor. Some will refuse this and move on a new planet to prepare the rebellion . Guys if this is not Star War it really look like.

    sweet nectar???? the melange of Dune?? (Frank Herbert ndr)
  8. GeorgeSkywalker

    GeorgeSkywalker Explorer

    Intresting, very interesting indeed ...

    but don't let Ms9 see this, oh boy once she see's it's a purple liquid :drool:
  9. Lykke TheNun

    Lykke TheNun Lootius bless you all!

    Which is where my quote is from ;)

    But that doesn't matter. What you see is only s very brief sneak peak into the story of Cyrene! And to get a story line with actual content is something I for one have been longing after!

    I believe this is a great sign and personally I look forward to hear more about the story.

    And yes, one empire taking over the whole universe and collonisation of planets etc. is far from new - or the question whether you should pick the blue pill or the red pill - but I don't believe that matters. The story brings the game to life - and ad more meat to the bones. Makes us feel we're a part of something greater, and I'm sure we haven't heard everything yet ...
  10. MindStar9

    MindStar9 Floating in Space

    OMG ... "purple sweet nectar" ... with a side effect of "enlightenment" ? ... how much more perfect can you get than THAT I ask you. :bigsmile: What a great sneak peek, and I'm with Peter ... can't wait for more. Ed, you did the nectar honor by making it purple, as purple is a royal color and worthy of those who deserve it ... like all of us Entropians waiting for Cyrene to appear in our planetary system.

    I say bring it on, and I would like to pre-order a supply please. [​IMG]

    And AG ... don't knock the purple nectar, or I knock you.

  11. RAZER

    RAZER Custom title ... uh ...

    Great stuff Ed thank you very much for that.
    Man, would a trailer movie with this as a script ROCK and attract lots of people to the game !!
  12. was there ever given an ETA for Cyrene? Wondering when i can finally leave calypso :)
  13. RAZER

    RAZER Custom title ... uh ...

    So that kinda means 'soon'
  14. GeorgeSkywalker

    GeorgeSkywalker Explorer

    Where did u get that quote? i vaguely remember the 60 people but not 2010 part...
  15. RAZER

    RAZER Custom title ... uh ...

    well it is in our wiki, let me see if I can find where it was said originally.


    it is from an interview with Ed (the one from the OP)

    Second paragraph below the image with the roundabout on it
  16. Kay Jones

    Kay Jones who?

    From what I've read about the history of the entropia universe on the calypso website there are no alien civilizations and the empire is humans only (correct me if thats just messed up in my head^^). did they just introduce those (turrelions)?

    you can hardly go without story similarities nowadays, everythings been made up before. what they can do is make a good mix of what there is, so I'm fine with that.

    but one thing is really too much. really. I mean, the sons of [STRIKE]korhal[/STRIKE] remus fighting underground on a planet at the edge of the known universe to free the people? seriously? :poke:
  17. I am so excited about this now :clap::drool:.

    Does the storyline means Cyrene is going to be at war with Calypso or at least with the corporations that run Calypso?

    Or is this empire part of a different storyline and not related to Calypso at all?

    Just want to say HURRY UP!, I can hardly wait...
  18. actually this could be very nice........ but the entropia universe system will not allow winners or loosers.......
  19. Nor Alien

    Nor Alien Wisker Fish

    Dear god I have died and gone to Cyrene heaven!! :drool: Go purple juice!! :thumbup:
  20. All of our hopes lie with you. No pressure ;)
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